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As I said yesterday, I really love the winter season. The winter season make me feel warm in spite of cold. I think that's because winter season have the Christmas and the year-end. People feel warm mood, and I'm one of them! So, I want to come the winter!!

Hi [이름]! Happy Tuesday!   Ohhh ~~~ That is really a surprise! You like winter. I envy you. You can play the snow. You can experience White Christmas. I somehow agree that winter is also a good season. Christmas and New Year make winter overwhelming.   Anyway, don\'t forget to see the corrections and suggestions below. Be careful with your subject-verb agreement. As a whole, you did a great job! Keep it up!   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     As I said yesterday, I really love the winter season. >> CORRECT! The winter season make me feel warm in spite of cold. >> Winter season makes me feel warm in spite of cold. >> OR: Winter season makes me feel warm in spite of the cold weather. I think that\'s because winter season have the Christmas and the year-end. >> I think that\'s because winter season Christmas and the year-end. >> OR: I think that\'s because in winter there are the Christmas and year-end. People feel warm mood, and I\'m one of them! >> Some people feel a warm mood, and I\'m one of them. >> OR: Some people are in a warm mood, and I\'m one of them. So, I want to come the winter!! >> Therefore, I want winter to come!