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2014-06-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Hi ~ good morning Jeny. It's the start of a brand new week now. Thursday, we talked on the creative accounting. The dictionary definition of the creative accouting is to fraud the accounting or manipulate an account book. I postponed class on friday because I had to ride on the subway in order that I go to my company. Usually I go to my company by car but I appointmented with my friends to eat dinner. Have a bright start to the week.

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Hello [이름],It is really nice to hear you voice every morning. Please, check your sentence construction so that you\'ll familiarize yourself in creating the sentence to use and utter.Have a bright day ahead of you!!!T. JenyHi ~ good morning Jeny.>>correctIt\'s the start of a brand new week now.>>correctThursday, we talked on the creative accounting.>>Last Thursday, we talked about creative accounting.The dictionary definition of the creative accouting is to fraud the accounting or manipulate an account book.>>The dictionary\'s definition of creative accounting is to fraud or manipulate an accounting  book.I postponed class on friday because I had to ride on the subway in order that I go to my company.>>I postponed our class last Friday because I had to ride on the train to go to my company.Usually I go to my company by car but I appointmented with my friends to eat dinner.>>I usually use my car going to my company but I had an appointment with my friends to eat dinner.Have a bright start to the week.>>Have a bright day to start the week.

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