Hi!
학생이 쓴 원문
I like to visit simple designed websites. Especially, unique magazine shop is one of the simple websites. I like empty place and white background in the website. This web-design makes products special, and makes me to buy whatever!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Happy Monday!
You did a good composition!
However, you can make a longer composition next time.
Explain your points further.
Explore your ability in writing.
Anyway, see you later! ^.^
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
I like to visit simple designed websites.
>> CORRECT!
Especially, unique magazine shop is one of the simple websites.
>> Especially Unique Magazine Shop since it is one of the simple websites.
I like empty place and white background in the website.
>> CORRECT!
This web-design makes products special, and makes me to buy whatever!
>> This web-design makes products special, and it makes me buy whatever that are posted on the site.
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