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2014-07-04 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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I think, I'm not be able to have lessons for tow days. Today, I'm planing to see a doctor beacuse of my eyes sight and tomorrow I have to have a surgery in a same hospital. :0 I feel really familar with that hospital.LOL Actually, I was born at the hospital and when I was a 9 years old little girl, having a bad cold, I also went there. Even the first time that I crushed on residant was in the same place. How funny!

강사 첨삭

Happy Wednesday, my dear [이름]!

 

I am sad because I won\'t be able to talk to you for two days, but I understand.

Anyway, I hope that there\'s no serious problem with your eyes. As for your surgery, be strong okay?

You are such a brave young lady so I know that everything will go well. Let me know if you will meet the resident you had a crush on.

I\'m excited to know how would you react.

 

Good luck on your surgery and see you soon!

 

~Teacher Shanee

 

I think, I\'m not be able to have lessons for tow days.

>>> I think, I won\'t be able to have lessons for two days.

Today, I\'m planing to see a doctor beacuse of my eyes sight and tomorrow I have to have a surgery in a same hospital.

>>>  Today, I am planning to see a doctor because of my eyesight and tomorrow, I need to have the surgery in the same hospital.

:0 I feel really familar with that hospital.LOL

>>> Correct! (familiar)
Actually, I was born at the hospital and when I was a 9 years old little girl, having a bad cold, I also went there.

>>> Actually, I was born in that hospital and when I was 9 years old and was having a cold, I also went there to get treatment.

Even the first time that I crushed on residant was in the same place.

>>> I even had a crush on a resident in that hospital.

How funny!

>>> Correct!

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