HI
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i saw your ask that children should [이름]res and take to do at home.
I think that To [이름]res is benifical things from middle s[이름]ol.
It is one chance to learn a small society.
They can learn consideration and sharing each other's feeling, taking to do someting which is helped thier mom and fatherat at home.
Hi ~ ROSE
Today is first class with you.
That was fun and made me happy.
Thank u. ^^
I like ur powerfull voice having me see morning hours.
See u tommorow.
강사 첨삭
I am so glad my powerful voice woke you up^^
Thanks for being jolly, too!
I can not wait to hear your voice tomorrow, [이름]!
i saw your ask that children should [이름]res and take to do at home.
>>I think that children should do housework.
>>I saw that asking your children do [이름]res at home is good.I think that To [이름]res is benifical things from middle s[이름]ol.
>>Since middle s[이름]ol, I have thought that doing [이름]res is a beneficial thing.It is one chance to learn a small society.
>>It is a chance to learn from a small society.They can learn consideration and sharing each other\'s feeling, taking to do someting which is helped thier mom and fatherat at home.>>They can learn it from sharing each other\'s feelings, taking turns to help their mother and father at home.Hi ~ ROSE
>>Hi, Rose!Today is first class with you.
>>Today\'s my first class with you.That was fun and made me happy.
>>That was fun and it made me happy. Thank u. ^^
>>Thank you.I like ur powerfull voice having me see morning hours.
>>I like your powerful voice which wakes me up in the morning hours.See u tommorow.
>>CORRECT!
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