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2014-07-02 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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i saw your ask that children should [이름]res and take to do at home. I think that To [이름]res is benifical things from middle s[이름]ol. It is one chance to learn a small society. They can learn consideration and sharing each other's feeling, taking to do someting which is helped thier mom and fatherat at home. Hi ~ ROSE Today is first class with you. That was fun and made me happy. Thank u. ^^ I like ur powerfull voice having me see morning hours. See u tommorow.

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I am so glad my powerful voice woke you up^^ Thanks for being jolly, too! I can not wait to hear your voice tomorrow, [이름]! i saw your ask that children should [이름]res and take to do at home. >>I think that children should do housework. >>I saw that asking your children do [이름]res at home is good.I think that To [이름]res is benifical things from middle s[이름]ol. >>Since middle s[이름]ol, I have thought that doing [이름]res is a beneficial thing.It is one chance to learn a small society. >>It is a chance to learn from a small society.They can learn consideration and sharing each other\'s feeling, taking to do someting which is helped thier mom and fatherat at home.>>They can learn it from sharing each other\'s feelings, taking turns to help their mother and father at home.Hi ~ ROSE >>Hi, Rose!Today is first class with you. >>Today\'s my first class with you.That was fun and made me happy. >>That was fun and it made me happy. Thank u. ^^ >>Thank you.I like ur powerfull voice having me see morning hours. >>I like your powerful voice which wakes me up in the morning hours.See u tommorow. >>CORRECT!

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