HI~
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How can better relationships be created between countries in the world?
We are not definitely right and we are not definitely wrong.
We are just human. We can make a mistake. We should know this.
If, I make a mistake. I should be an apology.
From small beginnings came great things, as the saying goes.
I remembered it.
강사 첨삭
Hello Soon Gyo,
Have a fabulous Thursday!
Thank you once again for sending your composition.
I hope all of us knows how to apologize.
When we apologize, we should be sincere in doing it. Right?
So, I\'ll just call you later.
T. Barbara**,
How can better relationships be created between countries in the world?We are not definitely right and we are not definitely wrong.>> Sometimes we are definitely right and sometimes we commit a mistake.We are just human.
>> Correct!
OR:
>> We are human beings.
We can make a mistake.
>> Correct!
OR:
>> We can commit a mistake.
We should know this.>> Correct!
OR:
>> We should practice this.
If, I make a mistake. I should be an apology.
>> If I make a mistake, I should apologize.From small beginnings came great things, as the saying goes.
>> Small beginnings come from great things, as the saying goes.
OR:
>> Small things come from big or great things, as the saying goes.I remembered it.
>> Correct!
OR:>> I recalled it.
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