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2014-07-03 · 첨삭 강사 Barbara

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How can better relationships be created between countries in the world? We are not definitely right and we are not definitely wrong. We are just human. We can make a mistake. We should know this. If, I make a mistake. I should be an apology. From small beginnings came great things, as the saying goes. I remembered it.

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Hello Soon Gyo, Have a fabulous Thursday!   Thank you once again for sending your composition. I hope all of us knows how to apologize. When we apologize, we should be sincere in doing it. Right? So, I\'ll just call you later.   T. Barbara**,   How can better relationships be created between countries in the world?We are not definitely right and we are not definitely wrong.>> Sometimes we are definitely right and sometimes we commit a mistake.We are just human. >> Correct! OR: >> We are human beings. We can make a mistake. >> Correct! OR: >> We can commit a mistake. We should know this.>> Correct! OR: >> We should practice this. If, I make a mistake. I should be an apology. >> If I make a mistake, I should apologize.From small beginnings came great things, as the saying goes. >> Small beginnings come from great things, as the saying goes. OR: >> Small things come from big or great things, as the saying goes.I remembered it. >> Correct! OR:>> I recalled it.  

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