hi
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
How are
you doing? I hope you뭨e having fun right now.
You know, studying English takes time so you have to be patient with it.
Though I can see improvements from you already, you still need to strive further for it.
Please be much aware with the sentence pattern and be careful with the words that you will be using for your sentences. The best thing there is you learn more vocabularies that could help you have more choices of words to avoid stammering.
Be cautious of your prepositions, be-verbs and articles too.
It뭩 good that you are getting more aware with the tenses of verbs now.
Nevertheless, you뭨e doing well in our classes!
Have fun studying and enjoy your day. See you on Monday!!! Take care! ^_^
T. Abby ^_^
Here are my corrections for you:
I just think I should be write it.
>> I just think I should be writing it.
>> I just think of writing to you.
Anyway, I happy to hear Improvement of the English.
>> Anyway, I뭢 so happy hearing that I improved in English
>> Anyway, I뭢 so glad to know that I improved my English.
I will strive to now more than.
>>I will strive more from this time.
>> I will strive more.
Anyway, I ate chicken to 10 coupons.
>>Anyway, I ate chicken at a restaurant to earn 10 coupons.
I order to one chicken whenever chicken shop given to me 1 coupon.
>> Whenever I order a chicken, they will give me 1 coupon.
Change can be 10 coupons to 1 chicken.
>> When you get to earn 10 coupons, you can exchange these coupons to 1 chicken.
Have it in Philippines?
>> Do you have it in the Philippines?
>> Are there some restaurants in the Philippines which do have promos like this?
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