HI~
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi~ How was it going today? I am wrtiting a letter for you cause I am thinking of you now. Do you impressed by my word? hh
Today, amount of my tasks that I should take care is small, I have a lot of free time!!
For a 2 weeks ago, you wondered about our Korea women her name is "Park-Guen Hye". She is politician who has powerful authority so we can expect she will be a president.
But someone they don't think she can't be a president. Because of her father who was korea president name is "Park-Gung-Hui". He was dictator and governed by army. So that time 1980s, Korea citizen we didn't have freedom and democracy. Like as Ezypt demonstration, we achived democracy and he was murdered by killer.
OK! If you have more question anytime ask me please, I will tell you.
bye~
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름],
Thank you for this informative composition. It also happened in the Philippines in February 25, 1986.
People were united so that our country will have its democracy. Let's talk about it later. See you!
-Jessica-Hi~
>>Correct
How was it going today?
>>How is it going today?
I am wrtiting a letter for you cause I am thinking of you now.
>> Correct^^
Do you impressed by my word? hh
>> Were you impressed by my words?Today, amount of my tasks that I should take care is small, I have a lot of free time!!
>>Today, the amount of work that I should take care is small, I have a lot of free time!!For a 2 weeks ago, you wondered about our Korea women her name is "Park-Guen Hye".
>> Two weeks ago, you wondered about a Korean woman named "Park-Guen Hye"
She is politician who has powerful authority so we can expect she will be a president.
>>She is a politician who has powerful authority so we expect that she will be the president. But someone they don't think she can't be a president.
>>But some people think she cannot be a president.
Because of her father who was korea president name is "Park-Gung-Hui".
>> Because of her father who was Korean president named "Park-Gung-Hui".
He was dictator and governed by army.
>> He was a dictator and governed the army.
So that time 1980s, Korea citizen we didn't have freedom and democracy.
>> So that time (1980s) Korean citizens do not have democracy.
Like as Ezypt demonstration, we achived democracy and he was murdered by killer.
>>Like in Egypt demonstration, we achived democracy and he was murdered by a killer.
OK! If you have more question anytime ask me please, I will tell you.
>>OK! If you have more questions ask me anytime please. I will tell you about it.bye~
>> Correct
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