Hi!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello. It's me, [이름].
Your class is very funny and valuable.
I think you are a very popular teacher so, I can understand that you got confused with your schedules.
You always do your best in our class.
I'm motivated because of you.
Whenever I buy a lottery ticket, I was always a loser.
But I'll buy a lottery ticket today because of Boracay. kk
I will travel a lot of places around the world.
If you want, you can travel with me.
When I win a lottery, the alpha and omega of my trip is Boracay.
Oh~ These imaginations are very fantastic.kk
Dreaming of winning a lottery, I go to school.
... I don't know why, I'm a bit sad.
kkkk
Anyway Have a lucky day.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!! Oh dear, why are you feeling sad. Let me guess, I think you miss your boyfriend. Or maybe you lack of sleep. Oh cheer up now. Stay beautiful and keep on smiling. See you tomorrow.
Lei J
Hello. It's me, [이름].
>>correct
Your class is very funny and valuable.
>>correct
I think you are a very popular teacher so, I can understand that you get confused with your schedules.
>>correct
You always do your best in our class.
>>correct
I'm motivated because of you.
>>correct
Whenever I buy a lottery ticket, I was always a loser.
>>Whenever I buy a lottery ticket, I always lose.
But I'll buy a lottery ticket today because of Boracay. kk
>>correct
I will travel a lot of places around the world.
>>I will travel to a lot of places around the world.
If you want, you can travel with me.
>>correct
When I win a lottery, the alpha and omega of my trip is Boracay.
>>If I'll win the lottery, the alpha and omega of my trip is Boracay.
Oh~ These imaginations are very fantastic.kk
>>correct
Dreaming of winning a lottery, I go to school.
>>I'm dreaming of winning the lottery while I'm on my way to school.
... I don't know why, I'm a bit sad.
>>correct
kkkk
>>correct
Anyway Have a lucky day.
>>correct
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