Hi!

2011-02-16 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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Hello. It's me, [이름]. Your class is very funny and valuable. I think you are a very popular teacher so, I can understand that you got confused with your schedules. You always do your best in our class. I'm motivated because of you. Whenever I buy a lottery ticket, I was always a loser. But I'll buy a lottery ticket today because of Boracay. kk I will travel a lot of places around the world. If you want, you can travel with me. When I win a lottery, the alpha and omega of my trip is Boracay. Oh~ These imaginations are very fantastic.kk Dreaming of winning a lottery, I go to school. ... I don't know why, I'm a bit sad. kkkk Anyway Have a lucky day.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!!! Oh dear, why are you feeling sad. Let me guess, I think you miss your boyfriend. Or maybe you lack of sleep. Oh cheer up now. Stay beautiful and keep on smiling. See you tomorrow. Lei J   Hello. It's me, [이름]. >>correct Your class is very funny and valuable. >>correct I think you are a very popular teacher so, I can understand that you get confused with your schedules. >>correct You always do your best in our class. >>correct I'm motivated because of you. >>correct Whenever I buy a lottery ticket, I was always a loser. >>Whenever I buy a lottery ticket, I always lose. But I'll buy a lottery ticket today because of Boracay. kk >>correct I will travel a lot of places around the world. >>I will travel to a lot of places around the world. If you want, you can travel with me. >>correct When I win a lottery, the alpha and omega of my trip is Boracay. >>If I'll win the lottery, the alpha and omega of my trip is Boracay. Oh~ These imaginations are very fantastic.kk >>correct Dreaming of winning a lottery, I go to school. >>I'm dreaming of winning the lottery while I'm on my way to school. ... I don't know why, I'm a bit sad. >>correct kkkk >>correct Anyway Have a lucky day. >>correct

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