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2011-02-16 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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Thesedays I listened radio program . Everyday the program teach me more than 3 sentences. and emphasis it is really useful when you watch american dramas,movies. Nowadays I'm not sure that words they look very simple, easy. But it's really difficult to memorize and to use when we met friends, watch movies. So I decide to make sentences. It includes words that I learned in the morning. first I have to settle down and get busy. It sometimes makes me run down and out of juice. But nomally I show off the result of life or plans. Time goes by, my good habits are going to set in. But If I lost my mind ,some bad habits like oversleep and so on will cut in my life. so I step up like movie and be responsible adult!! I made my own sentences to use include some words I learned.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!!! Good job on doing your part to improve your skills. Just always be patient and keep it going. Take care!! See you tomorrow. Lei J   Thesedays I listened radio program . >>I listen to a radio program these days. Everyday the program teach me more than 3 sentences. >>I learn 3 new sentences from the radio program everyday. and emphasis it is really useful when you watch american dramas,movies. >>The emphasis is it really useful to watch American dramas or movies. Nowadays I'm not sure that words they look very simple, easy. >>I am not sure nowadays if the words look very simple and easy. But it's really difficult to memorize and to use them when we meet our friends or watch movies. >>correct So I decide to make sentences. >>So I decided to make sentences. It includes words that I learned in the morning. >>correct first I have to settle down and get busy. >>First, I have to settle down before I get busy. It sometimes makes me run down and out of juice. >>It sometimes makes me run out of juice. But nomally I show off the result of life or plans. >>But I normally show off the results of my plans. Time goes by, my good habits are going to set in. >>correct But If I lost my mind ,some bad habits like oversleep and so on will cut in my life. >>But if I lost my concentration, some bad habits like oversleeping will cut in. so I step up like movie and be responsible adult!! >>So I will step up like in the movie and be a responsible adult. I made my own sentences to use include some words I learned. >>I made my own sentences using the new words that I learned.

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