Hi~
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I totally agree with the statement. There's no one who can understand my character like parents. Parents can read my purpose and thinking, so they can suggest the best way to go the the purpose through their experiences. Any other teachers can't do that great thing.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^.^
Happy Thursday! ^^
Long time no composition! ^^ Kkk ~~~ ^^
I\'m just kidding.
You have a very strong expression of your idea towards the given subject.
You didn\'t really write a long composition.
However, you have made everything clear.
Very good! ^^
Anyway, see you later! ^^
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
I totally agree with the statement.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I absolutely agree with the statement.There\'s no one who can understand my character like parents.
>> There\'s no one who can understand my character like my parents.
Parents can read my purpose and thinking, so they can suggest the best way to go the the purpose through their experiences.
>> They can read my purpose and thinking, so they can suggest the best way I can use to go ahead with my purpose through their experiences.
>> OR: They can read my purpose and thinking, so they can suggest the best way I can use to go ahead with my purpose because of their experience.
Any other teachers can\'t do that great thing.
>> CORRECT!
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