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2014-09-15 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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The happiest time of my life is maybe when I go shopping. of course, these are also happy time when I have a time with my family, friends and when I get A+ grade in my classes and so on, Like this, There is much moment to feel happy in my life, But there is the reason why I choose to go shopping which is the happiest time. Presently, I am a student. So, I don’t spend much money to get items which I want. I always have troubles when I buy anything. Therefore, I am very happy when I buy things that I wanted. at that time, I see the thing during all day. Kelly, I am having a lot of troubles whenever I write in English. my sentences are always very simple and same. I write what I have written before. when I ~~, I am ~~, ... I want to use various sentences and words. How do you think about this ways that I can use various sentences and words when I write sentences in English.

강사 첨삭

Hi Dana!Thank you for sharing your eagerness to improve your English skills. There are a lot of ways that you can follow in order to develop your skills. We can discuss some of the ways during our class. And I also encourage your to be more patient in learning English. I know that you can do it. kkk Have a great day! ~Teacher Kelly^^ The happiest time of my life is maybe when I go shopping. >> Maybe, the happiest time of my life is when I go shopping. of course, these are also happy time when I have a time with my family, friends and when I get A+ grade in my classes and so on, Like this, There is much moment to feel happy in my life, >> Of course, there are a lot of happy times in my life like when I spend time with my family and friends, when I get an A+ in my classes and so on. There are a lot of good moments that make my life happy.But there is the reason why I choose to go shopping which is the happiest time. >> But there is a reason why shopping is the happiest time in my life. Presently, I am a student. >> Correct. So, I don’t spend much money to get items which I want. I always have troubles when I buy anything. >> So, I don\'t spend much money in buying the items that I want. I always have trouble when I buy something. Therefore, I am very happy when I buy things that I wanted. >> Therefore, I feel very happy when I can buy the things that I wanted. at that time, I see the thing during all day. >> At that time, I just stared at what I have purchased all day. Kelly, I am having a lot of troubles whenever I write in English. >> Kelly, I am having a lot of trouble whenever I write in English. my sentences are always very simple and same. >> My sentences are always very simple and the same. I write what I have written before. >> I just wrote what I have already written before. when I ~~, I am ~~, ... I want to use various sentences and words. >> I want to use vatious words and expressions when constructing sentences. How do you think about this ways that I can use various sentences and words when I write sentences in English. >> What are some ways that I can so I can various sentences and words when I write sentences in English?

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