hi^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Kelly^^
long time no see
how are you??
Today, the result of my interview attended a few days ago is announced. um.. It is too said... I didn’t pass it. um So, Today I submitted a request for leave of absence to my university for my future. I am planning to study english half a year. Accurately For studying Toeic test and Toeic speaking test. It is a shame that I was absent our final class. At that time I listened my major class. I couldn’t help being absent. Sorry. during the classes with you, I could really enjoy it. Thank you. But I still can’t speak english very well..I think The reason why I didn’t raise up my english skill is that my practice lacked. even though the sentence is not perfect, I currently can write what I want to say in english. But whenever I speak in english, I hurry to say in english. and I don’t speak complete sentence. just I use a word. Not sentence. I have to overcome it. I will effort for it.
강사 첨삭
Hi there!Thank you for dropping by even if your classes with me is already over. Sorry to hear that you did not make it. I\'m sure there are better opportunities in store for you out there. Thank you for your time!
~Teacher Kelly^^
Hi Kelly^^
>> Correct.long time no see
>> Long time no see.how are you??
>> Correct.>> How are you?Today, the result of my interview attended a few days ago is announced.
>> Today, I got the result of my job interview a few days ago.
um.. It is too said... I didn’t pass it. um
>> It is too sad... I did not pass.
So, Today I submitted a request for leave of absence to my university for my future.
>> So today, I submitted a request of leave of absence to my university.
I am planning to study english half a year.
>> I am planning to study English for half a year.
Accurately For studying Toeic test and Toeic speaking test.
>> I want to prepare for my TOEIC test.
It is a shame that I was absent our final class.
>> It is a shame that I was absent in our last class.
At that time I listened my major class.
>> At that time, I was in my major class.
I couldn\'t help being absent. Sorry.
>> Correct.
during the classes with you, I could really enjoy it.
>> I really enjoyed my classes with you.
Thank you.
>> Correct.
But I still can\'t speak english very well..
>> But I still can\'t speak English very well.
I think The reason why I didn’t raise up my english skill is that my practice lacked.
>> I think that the reason why my English skills don\'t improve is because of lack of practice.
even though the sentence is not perfect, I currently can write what I want to say in english.
>> Even if my grammar is not perfect, I can write what I want to say in English.
But whenever I speak in english, I hurry to say in english.
>> But whenever I speak in English, I always talk fast.
and I don’t speak complete sentence.
>> And I don\'t speak in a complete sentence.
just I use a word. Not sentence.
>> I only say a word or speak in phrases.
I have to overcome it.
>> Correct.
I will effort for it.
>> I will exert an effort in improving my skills.
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