Hi =)
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello. Time is running very fast.
Good Afternoon teacher. =)
I'm happy to compose the sentences again.
Here are my additional answers.
I took tests last winter semester.
I studied a bit during midterm exam so, I stuied hard after that.
So I recieved 3.72 out of 4.5.
I liked to study of Marketing.
Marketing is introducing our product to public through creative ways.
So it is very interesting.
My answers is finished.
Anyways I'll call to the manager in order to reschedule our class.
I hope to continue our class. =)
See you tomorrow. Thank you always for your help!
Have a great day dear. =)
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!! Time really flies like an arrow. As you can see, another day is about to end. ^^ Okay then I hope that you can fix your schedule. I hope you will still continue having lessons with me because I feel so comfortable talking to you. I hope you feel the same way. Take care dear.
Lei J
Hello. Time is running very fast.
>>correct
>>Hello. Time really flies.
Good Afternoon teacher. =)
>>correct
I'm happy to compose the sentences again.
>>I'm happy to make a composition again.
Here are my additional answers.
>>correct
I took tests last winter semester.
>>correct
I studied a bit during midterm exam so, I stuied hard after that.
>>I studied only a bit during the midterm exams, so I studied hard after that.
So I recieved 3.72 out of 4.5.
>>So I got a score of 3.72 out of 4.5.
I liked to study of Marketing.
>>I like to study about Marketing.
Marketing is introducing our product to public through creative ways.
>>correct
So it is very interesting.
>>correct
My answers is finished.
>>These are my answers.
Anyways I'll call to the manager in order to reschedule our class.
>>Anyways, I'll call the mangers about my class schedule.
I hope to continue our class. =)
>>correct
See you tomorrow. Thank you always for your help!
>>correct
Have a great day dear. =)
>>correct
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