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Hi [이름]!
How\'s your day? Was it fun?
Enjoy your military training! ^^
And please do take care of yourself.
See you later.
-T.Naomi
Today, I\'m going to write about military because I must get trained tomorrow.
>>Today, I\'m going to write about military because I must train tomorrow.
Korea men must be army. It\'s duty for Korea men. After doing regular military service, we must get trained for 6 or 7 years.
>>Korean men must join the army. It\'s a duty for every Korean man. After undergoing regular military service, we must be trained for 6 or 7 years.
Regular service is what go to the army and then live in there for 2 years. We call the person who finished their regualr service to reservist.
>>Regular military service is going to the army and then live there for 2 years. We call the person who finished the regular service \"reservist\".
Reservist get training just 1 day per year. I finished my service at 2009. But, it\'s very weird because reservist gets trained just one day.
>>Reservist gets training just 1 day per year. I finished my service in 2009. But, it\'s very weird because reservist gets training just for one day.
However, it makes me annoyed, I mean that I don\'t want to go there.
>>correct
>>OR: However, it annoys me, I mean I don\'t want to go there again.
When I go there, I am going to get some education, and shooting a gun, something like that. Sometimes, shooting a gun is exciting.
>>When I go there, I am going to be trained like shooting, something like that. Sometimes, shooting is exciting.
But, it\'s a liite scareing. Lucklly, there are fun stuff. For example, I can meet the person who I know. So we can talk about memoryes.
>>But, it\'s a liite scary. Luckily, there are fun stuffs. For example, I can meet the person whom I knew. So we can talk about our memories.
And then you know, you can escape from your work.
>>correct
haha Anyway, I want to finish this process by fast.
>>haha Anyway, I want to finish this training fast.
Bye~
>>Bye.
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