Hi
학생이 쓴 원문
How was your weekend?
I stayed at home with my children.
My husband went on a picnic with his co-workers.
I will go on a picnic with my family this weekend.
Anyway, last thursday class I didn't understand a lof of things.
So I was disappointed to me.
Please let me know in advance word before our class.
I don't know many words.
Here is my homework.
Once upon a time there was a man called Hwanung.
His son was Tangun.
Tangun built country called Gojoseon.
Gojoseon was dorn in A.D. on October 3, was in 2333.
Today, we celebrate this day.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
How are you? Thank you for your message.
By the way, kindly researsh about the protocol because
that will be our topic later on.
Anyway, thank you for making your homewoork. You did
good because you were able to share a bit of information about
your holiday. That\'s great. However, there are a few corrections and you have
to study those, okay.
Have a great day ahead and see you.
~~ Teacher Kris
How was your weekend?
>> CorrectI stayed at home with my children.
>> CorrectMy husband went on a picnic with his co-workers.
>> CorrectI will go on a picnic with my family this weekend.
>> Correct
Anyway, last thursday class I didn\'t understand a lof of things.
>> CorrectSo I was disappointed to me.
>> So, I was disappointed to myself.Please let me know in advance word before our class.
>>Please let me know in advance the vocabularies before the class starts.I don\'t know many words.
>> CorrectHere is my homework.
>> CorrectOnce upon a time there was a man called Hwanung.
>> Once upon a time, there was a man named Hwanung,His son was Tangun.
>> His son was named Tangun.Tangun built country called Gojoseon.
>> Tangun built a country called Gojoseon.Gojoseon was dorn in A.D. on October 3, was in 2333.
>> Gojoseon. was born in October 3, 2333 A.D.Today, we celebrate this day.
>> Correct
>> OR: So, we always celebrate the National Foundation Day every year of October 3.
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