Hi~
학생이 쓴 원문
I'd like to buy a concert tickets. To go to the concert will be a irreplaceable memory. It's more precious than to buy a expensive jewelry. That experience to go to my favorite concert with favorite people will shine in my memory.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^.^
Happy Tuesday! ^^
What is that concert you are talking about?
I am really curious about it.
I want to know more about your interests. ^^
By the way, you did a wonderful composition.
However, I think you are still confused with the usage of Articles or \"Gwansa\".
Try to research about articles! ^^
Anyway, see you later! ^^
Have a great day ahead! ^^
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
>> I\'d like to buy a concert ticket.
>> OR: I\'d like to buy some concert tickets.
To go to the concert will be a irreplaceable memory.
>> To go to a concert will be an irreplaceable memory.
>> OR: Going to a concert will be an irreplaceable memory.
It\'s more precious than to buy a expensive jewelry.
>> It\'s more precious than to buy an expensive jewelry.
>> OR: It\'s more precious than buying an expensive jewelry.
That experience to go to my favorite concert with favorite people will shine in my memory.
>> CORRECT!
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