Hi ^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi kris.
Here is my homework.
I think I haven't given best present to someone but I have gotten best present from my office.
Two years ago, I won the best employee so I went to China and I received the prize with some money.
That is my best present.
See you later. ^^
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Happy Friday! Thank you for making your homework.
It\'s quite short but it\'s okay. Wow! you had received the best gift ever and
that is being the best employee. You had received much money as well.
I\'m proud of you. Keep it up!
~~Teacher Kris
>> Hi Kris.
Here is my homework.
Here is my homework.
>> Correct
I think I haven\'t given best present to someone but I have gotten best present from my office.
>> I think I haven\'t given the best present to someone but I have gotten the best present from my office.
Two years ago, I won the best employee so I went to China and I received the prize with some money.
Two years ago, I won the best employee so I went to China and I received the prize with some money.
>> Correct
That is my best present.
>> Correct
See you later. ^^
See you later. ^^
>> Correct
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