Hi ^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi kris.
Thank you for your advice.
These days I was watching an English carton movie.
Listening is easier than Speaking to me.
Speaking is very difficult to me.
Here is my homework.
If I am a teacher. I want to teach an English.
So I would show a lot of English movie.
Most korean children learn grammer in their first english class time.
I think that listening is very important.
That's why I want to teach an English.
p.s Yesterday, I couldn't understand part of your English massage.
I am sorry.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Well, I\'m sorry about yesterday that you were not able to
understand me. Anyway, I would like to say that both speaking and listening
are very important for effective communication. So, we have to
enhance these skills. Good thing that you watch English cartoon movies.
It can help you actually.
Anyway, good luck with that and take care always.
~~Teacher Kris
Hi Kris.Thank you for your advice.
>> CorrectThese days I was watching an English carton movie.
>> These days, I was watching English cartoon movie.Listening is easier than Speaking to me.
>> Listening is easier than speaking for me.Speaking is very difficult to me.>> Speaking is very difficult for me.Here is my homework.If I am a teacher. I want to teach an English.
>> If I am a teacher then I will English.So I would show a lot of English movie.
>> So, I will show a lot of English movies.Most korean children learn grammer in their first english class time.
>> Most Korean children learn grammar in their first English class.I think that listening is very important.
>> I think listening is very important.That\'s why I want to teach an English.>> That\'s why I want to teach English.p.s Yesterday, I couldn\'t understand part of your English massage.
>> CorrectI am sorry.
>> Correct
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