hi :)

i didn't reallize that today is holiday . on vacation, there's no mean of holiday. of course, you're diffrent with me :) did you hear that one korean singer had suicided?? oh, i heard that yesterday. it is regrettable that somenoe is killed by oneself. especailly, someone who is celebrity did that, it have a bad influence to society. it can make someone who want to suicide kill himself actally. but i think we can't criticize him or her because they had a very hard time that we can't infer. so.... sorry for my hard topic in your holiday:( i want for you to enjoy your nice time! have a super great day~

Hi there [이름]! It뭩 nice to read from you again.How뭩 yesterday? I think it everything went well. Maybe you were too focused on your activities that뭩 why you didn뭪 notice that it was holiday yesterday. Hmnn꿌 think you need to relax. I was saddened by your news that another Korean singer had committed suicide. It is just so sad.  Something might have hard for him so he killed himself. It뭩 going to be a hard time for his family and friends.^_^

Anyway here are some of the corrections of your composition. Review them. 

i didn't reallize that today is holiday .

>> correct ( But you have to always capitalize 멗