Hi ^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Thank for your message.
I spent enjoyable time in your class.
I have to memorize a lot of words.
Here is my homework.
My children are my teachers.
I learn love to my children.
They always say " I love mom." "May I hug you?" and "Mom, cheer up."
When I hear it, my heart become a warm.
See you later.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
I\'m flattered that you are enjoying my class.
Thank you so much. :) I\'m so happy for that.
Children are the best gift a mother can have. So, as a
parent to your children, be a guardian angel to them.
I know that your children loved you so much. :)
I\'m happy for you, [이름].
Take care and have a wonderful moment with your children.
~~Teacher Kris
Thank for your message.
>>Correct
>> OR: Thank you for the message.I spent enjoyable time in your class.
>> CorrectI have to memorize a lot of words.
>> Correct
>> OR: I have to memorize a lot of vocabularies.My children are my teachers.
>> Correct
>> OR: My children are like my teachers.I learn love to my children.
>> I learn how to love my children.They always say \" I love mom.\" \"May I hug you?\" and \"Mom, cheer up.\"
>> They always say, \"I love you mom; May I hug you?; Mom, cheer up.\"When I hear it, my heart become a warm.>> When I hear it, my heart became warm.
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