Hi ^^

2014-10-22 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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Thank for your message. I spent enjoyable time in your class. I have to memorize a lot of words. Here is my homework. My children are my teachers. I learn love to my children. They always say " I love mom." "May I hug you?" and "Mom, cheer up." When I hear it, my heart become a warm. See you later.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^ I\'m flattered that you are enjoying my class. Thank you so much. :) I\'m so happy for that. Children are the best gift a mother can have. So, as a parent to your children, be a guardian angel to them. I know that your children loved you so much. :) I\'m happy for you, [이름]. Take care and have a wonderful moment with your children.   ~~Teacher Kris   Thank for your message. >>Correct >> OR: Thank you for the message.I spent enjoyable time in your class. >> CorrectI have to memorize a lot of words. >> Correct >> OR: I have to memorize a lot of vocabularies.My children are my teachers. >> Correct >> OR: My children are like my teachers.I learn love to my children. >> I learn how to love my children.They always say \" I love mom.\" \"May I hug you?\" and \"Mom, cheer up.\" >> They always say, \"I love you mom; May I hug you?; Mom, cheer up.\"When I hear it, my heart become a warm.>> When I hear it, my heart became warm.

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