Hi ^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Kris. ^^
Did you have a good your weekend?
I had a good weekend. ^^
Here is my homework.
I wonder about Kris.
You and I meet everyday through phone call.
I always speak my story and you always ask me about my story.
Could you tell me your story? ^^
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] ! ^^
I had a good weekend eventhough it was a little bit boring.kk
About my life story, I will tell it to you soon. I will tell you little by little
or maybe I will write about it and send it to you. By the way, my life story is
a little bit dramatic. I had been through a lot of struggles. Anyway, you will
know about it soon. kk
See you, [이름]. :)
~~Teacher Kris
Did you have a good your weekend?
>> CorrectI had a good weekend. ^^
>> CorrectI wonder about Kris.
>> I wonder about your life, Kris.You and I meet everyday through phone call.
>> CorrectI always speak my story and you always ask me about my story.
>> I always tell you about my story because you awlays ask me about it.Could you tell me your story? ^^
>> Correct
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