Hi ^^

2014-10-28 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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Hi Kris. ^^ Did you have a good your weekend? I had a good weekend. ^^ Here is my homework. I wonder about Kris. You and I meet everyday through phone call. I always speak my story and you always ask me about my story. Could you tell me your story? ^^

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] ! ^^ I had a good weekend eventhough it was a little bit boring.kk About my life story, I will tell it to you soon. I will tell you little by little or maybe I will write about it and send it to you. By the way, my life story is a little bit dramatic. I had been through a lot of struggles. Anyway, you will know about it soon. kk See you, [이름]. :)   ~~Teacher Kris Did you have a good your weekend? >> CorrectI had a good weekend. ^^ >> CorrectI wonder about Kris. >> I wonder about your life, Kris.You and I meet everyday through phone call. >> CorrectI always speak my story and you always ask me about my story. >> I always tell you about my story because you awlays ask me about it.Could you tell me your story? ^^ >> Correct

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