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Hi. ^^ These days I was very tired. I don't know why. So, I will have a rest on this weekend. Here is my homework. Most Korean parent don't want their children because while they keep their children, they have to spend a lot of money. They can't save some money for their future. They want to enjoy their life. In my opinion, children and family are very important. So, I want to invent family holiday. I will explain this a new holiday. If family with three or more children keep their family, they would get seven days of paid vacation. Maybe a lot of family will be a happy.

Hi [이름]! Happy Halloween! ^^ Thank you so much for making your homework. I totally appreciate it. I like your holiday invention. It makes sense. It is also pretty nice idea. You are right our family is our first priority. Thank you so much [이름] for giving me such a nice idea. Anyway, take care always and have happy Halloween! ^^ ~~Teacher Kris Hi. ^^These days I was very tired. >> CorrectI don\'t know why. >> CorrectSo, I will have a rest on this weekend. >> Correct >> OR: So, I will take a rest on this weekend.Here is my homework. Most Korean parent don\'t want their children because while they keep their children, they have to spend a lot of money. >> Most Korean parents don\'t want to their children because if they do so, they have to spend much money for them.They can\'t save some money for their future. >> They won\'t be able to save money for their future.They want to enjoy their life. >> CorrectIn my opinion, children and family are very important. >> CorrectSo, I want to invent family holiday. >> So, I would like to invent a family holiday.I will explain this a new holiday. >> I will further explain this new holiday.If family with three or more children keep their family, they would get seven days of paid vacation. >> If families with three or more children keep their family, they would get seven days of paid vacation.Maybe a lot of family will be a happy. >> Correct