Hi ^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Kris.
It was cold.
I don't like cold. I like warm weather.
Last Friday, I had a headache.
So, while I was waiting for your call, I fell asleep.
Here is my homework.
Halloween party don't popular to Korean adult but young people and children like it.
When I was young I didn't know about Halloween.
However these children know about it.
Many adcademy and kindergarten have a Halloween party.
My oldest daughter attended a Halloween party in her English academy.
My youngest daughter made a Halloween mask in her kindergarten.
My husband and I worked.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
How are you? It is so sad that Halloween party is not popular
in your country. Halloween party is for everybody especially for kids, right?
Well, fortunately, your kids participated in the celebration of Halloween in their
respective schools. And, I bet they enjoyed it a lot.
Anyway, [이름], have great day ahead with your kids and be well, soon.
Take care! ^^
~~Teacher Kris
Hi Kris.
It was cold.>> Correct
I don\'t like cold.
I don\'t like cold.
>> I don\'t like cold weather
I like warm weather.
>> Correct
Last Friday, I had a headache.
>> Correct
>> OR: Last Friday, I was suffering from headache.
So, while I was waiting for your call, I fell asleep.
So, while I was waiting for your call, I fell asleep.
>> Correct
Here is my homework.
Halloween party don\'t popular to Korean adult but young people and children like it.
Here is my homework.
Halloween party don\'t popular to Korean adult but young people and children like it.
>> Halloween party is not popular to Korean adult but for young people, it is.
When I was young I didn\'t know about Halloween.
When I was young I didn\'t know about Halloween.
>> Correct
>> When I was young, I did not have any idea about Halloween.
However these children know about it.
However these children know about it.
>> However, these children knew about it.
Many adcademy and kindergarten have a Halloween party.
Many adcademy and kindergarten have a Halloween party.
>> Many academies and kindergarten schools have Halloween parties.
My oldest daughter attended a Halloween party in her English academy.
My oldest daughter attended a Halloween party in her English academy.
>> Correct
My youngest daughter made a Halloween mask in her kindergarten.
My youngest daughter made a Halloween mask in her kindergarten.
>>My youngest daughter made a Halloween mask in her kindergarten school.
My husband and I worked.
My husband and I worked.
>> Correct
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