Hi^^

2014-11-12 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Hi my teacher Erine~ I am so sorry for no response. That was my stupid mistake. I was sleeping that time. I finished my work at the hospital in the eraly morning. I would like to napping a little time. I used a earplug. I didn't catch any sounds. But I am happy to see your comment on webpage and your homework that you gave. I can show you my good habits. I have several good habits. But it is nothing special. One of my good habits is washing my hands and feet, when I came back home. When you are staying outside, you contact various bacteria you actually couldn't see. Another my good habit is that I don't like my work to do delay. I always have to my homework do it at first and then I take a rest. Last my good habit is doing a memo. I wrote my special event on my note. And I check my notebook. I shoud never forgot my important things. Those all were very trivial things. ^^ Definitely see you tomorrow~~~

강사 첨삭

Hello there, [이름]!^^
Being a nurse is really tiring so I thought it was the reason why
you were not able to answer my call.
However, I am glad that you are in a good state and nothing happened to you!^^
Regarding your composition, I would like to ask you about the word \"trivial\".
What do you mean by that in your sentence?
I understand the word \"trivial\" as something insignificant. However, your sentences are
significant for me! I hope you can explain that.
See you!^.^
~~Teacher Erine~~
Hi my teacher Erine~
>> Correct.
I am so sorry for no response. 
>> I am so sorry for not responding to your call.
That was my stupid mistake.
>>Correct.
I was sleeping that time. 
>> Correct.
I finished my work at the hospital in the eraly morning. 
>> I finished my work from the hospital early in the morning.
I would like to napping a little time. 
>> I would like to nap for quite some time.
I used a earplug. 
>> Then, I used my earplugs.
I didn\'t catch any sounds. 
>> I didn\'t hear any sounds after.
But I am happy to see your comment on webpage and your homework that you gave.
>> However, I am happy to see your comment on the website and your homework you gave.
I can show you my good habits. 
>> Correct.
I have several good habits. 
>> Correct.
But it is nothing special.
>> But they are nothing special.
One of my good habits is washing my hands and feet, when I came back home.
>> Correct.
When you are staying outside, you contact various bacteria you actually couldn\'t see.
>> When you are staying outside, you have a contact with various bacteria you actually couldn\'t see.
Another my good habit is that I don\'t like my work to do delay. 
>> Another one is that I don\'t like my work to be delayed.
I always have to my homework do it at first and then I take a rest. 
>> I always have to do my homework first then I take a rest.
Last my good habit is doing a memo.
>> Lastly, I write a memo.
I wrote my special event on my note. 
>> I wrote my special event/a special event on my note.
And I check my notebook. 
>> Correct. 
I shoud never forgot my important things.
>> I should never forget important things.
Those all were very trivial things. ^^
>> Those are very trivial things.
Definitely see you tomorrow~~~
>> Definitely, I will see you tomorrow.~~

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