Hi:)

2011-03-08 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning teacher. :) I'm pleased to greet in the morning. Although I got lots of sleep, I still have a bit headache. The temperature is a lot fluctuating recently, so I have a fever. (may be..) But I won't go hospital. I will have a folk remedy. =) I wonder how is the weather over there. Ah~ what do you do all the morning? Do you teach other people who need to learn English? or do you have a your time? Oops! I prepare to go to school in a hurry. I'll see you this evening. :)

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]! Nice to greet you too in the morning. Sometimes, when you over sleep, you really get headache. So, I think you just need 6-7 hours of sleep. ^0^ Anyways, anything that is done excessively is not good. But not in English because the more you practice, the better you become! Right?

Here are the corrections of your composition. Have time to check and practice:

-Teacher Kristel


Good morning teacher. :)

>> correct

>> OR: A wonderful morning Teacher!
I'm pleased to greet in the morning.

>> I'm pleased to greet you in the morning.
Although I got lots of sleep, I still have a bit headache.

>> Though I got enough sleep, I still have a little headache.
The temperature is a lot fluctuating recently, so I have a fever. (may be..) 

>>  Maybe because of the fluctuating weather recently, I got fever.

>> OR: Maybe I got my fever because of the fluctuating weather recently.
But I won't go hospital. 

>> But I won't go to the hospital.
I will have a folk remedy. =)

>> I will have the folk remedy. ( But it's better to see a doctor to be sure ^_^)
I wonder how is the weather over there. 

>> correct

>> OR: I wonder how's the weather like in your country?
Ah~ what do you do all the morning?

>> Ah, what do you do in the morning?
Do you teach other people who need to learn English? or do you have a your time?

>>  Do you teach other people English? Or do you have it as your free time?
Oops! I prepare to go to school in a hurry.

>> Oops!, I  have to hurry to school now!
I'll see you this evening. :)

>> ok!

ENJOY THE DAY!!

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