Hi^^

It could be an excuse, actually I didn't have time to check up your feedback and to write something here when I worked in school. Today, I feel more free, so I'm doing this. ^^ It is the first time that I write something here. I think it is so helpful that I try to use this everyday from now on. Also, I realize that my speeach is very slow. When I 'm talking with you, I didn't feel that. However, when I listen to what I spoke to you again, even I feel bored. I hope my English ability will get better than now. See you later.^^

Hello [이름]!   It's good to see you wrote me a letter. I always feel happy when my students write me a letter. Yes, this is a good way to practice your English writing as well. You don't have to write about serious stuff, you could make a simple diary or journal here. Or just write about things that you did today, anything you like.   About your speaking, I'm sure it will improve over time. You are speaking English much better compared to before. Don't give up, I know you can achieve your dream of being fluent in English. Thanks again and see you later [이름]. I really appreciate your letter.   Here are the corrections of your letter:   It could be an excuse, actually I didn't have time to check up your feedback and to write something here when I worked in school. Today, I feel more free, so I'm doing this. ^^ It is the first time that I write something here. I think it is so helpful that I try to use this everyday from now on. Also, I realize that my speeach is very slow. When I 'm talking with you, I didn't feel that. However, when I listen to what I spoke to you again, even I feel bored. I hope my English ability will get better than now. See you later.^^   Here is the revised version:   It could be an excuse, actually. I didn't have time to check your feedback and write something here while I'm working in school. Today, I feel more free, so I'm doing this. ^^ It is the first time that I wrote something here. I think this is so helpful that I'll try to use this everyday from now on. Also, I realize that my speech is very slow. When I 'm talking with you, I don't notice that. However, when I listen to what I'm saying to you again, even I feel bored. I hope my English ability will improve. See you later.^^