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Hi. ^^ I have a lot of idea because of my homework.^^ Here is my homework. Q : What is your opinion about, Immigrants to a country should be forced to learn that country's language? In my opinion, immigrants to a country must learn country's language. They have to work for their life in there, why they learn country's language. For example, they need their job to live, so they must speak and hear a lot of country's language. If they can't speak and hear, they must be to spend a hard time a long time.

Hi [이름]! ^^ How are you? Thank you for making your homework. I can see that you are improving. That is a good news to both of us. Keep it up! ^^ By the way, I like your opinion on this topic. The idea is there. However, I would like you study your corrections, okay.  Take care always and see you, my dear. ^^ ~~Teacher Kris In my opinion, immigrants to a country must learn country\'s language. >> In my opinion, immigrants to a country must learn the country\'s language.They have to work for their life in there, why they learn country\'s language. >> They have to work for their life in there while learning the country\'s language.For example, they need their job to live, so they must speak and hear a lot of country\'s language. >> Correct >> OR: For example, if they desperately need a job then they must learn the different languages of that certain country.If they can\'t speak and hear, they must be to spend a hard time a long time. >> If they can hardly speak the  languages then they must spend a long time to learn it.