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Hi there. TGIF~ Did you enjoy your day:)? I'm going to meet my schoolmates. Anyways let me introduce myself. I'm Hye Jin Lee. My English name is [이름]line. I'm 25 years old. I live in Gwang Ju. I was brought up in Je Cheon. I have a father, a mother, an older sister. I'm attending classes at JN national university. I'm senior, so I'm trying to get a job. I study bussiness management. I'm interested in Matketing. I like to device marketing stratagies because it is needed creative ideas, so I would like to be Marketing manager. My view of value is that human is the most important competitiveness. So, I think it is important to social network like meeting acquaintances and forging with new people. Please correct my introduction. Have a lovely day like you. :)

Hi [이름]! It’s so nice for you to introduce yourself more here. I appreciate it! I think, you are good in constructing sentences. You just need to be careful with the capitalizations and the correct spelling of words. Keep it up! -       Teacher Venus   Hi there. TGIF~ >> Hi there! TGIF!Did you enjoy your day:)? >> Did you enjoy your day? JI'm going to meet my schoolmates. >> CORRECTAnyways let me introduce myself.>>Anyway, let me introduce myself.I'm Hye Jin Lee. My English name is [이름]line. I'm 25 years old. >> CORRECT (capitalization of name: [이름]line)I live in Gwang Ju. I was brought up in Je Cheon. >>CORRECTI have a father, a mother, an older sister. >>CORRECTI'm attending classes at JN national university. >>CORRECTI'm senior, so I'm trying to get a job. >>I’m a senior so I’m trying to get a job.I study bussiness management. I'm interested in Matketing. >> I’m studying Business Management. I’m interested in Marketing.I like to device marketing stratagies because it is needed creative ideas, so I would like to be Marketing manager. >> I would like to device marketing strategies because it needs creative ideas. That is why I would like to be a Marketing Manager someday.My view of value is that human is the most important competitiveness.>>  My view in marketing is that human resource is the most important factor in terms of competition.So, I think it is important to social network like meeting acquaintances and forging with new people.>> So, I think, it is important to socialize like meeting people and having new acquaintances.