HI~

2011-03-11 · 첨삭 강사 Bianca

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, Jesica~~ How are you doing? Of cource, I'm fine. And I guess you too~ Right? Today I pressed a button delaying our today class. Cause my friends contacted me in the morning and they wanted to meet me after work. So, I'm so sorry about this. I'm always waiting to our class sincery. Talking with you that time is very funny and interesting. During the every calsses I feel time is so fast. anyway, I hope that you have a great friday night. Having a dinner with precious peaple and preparing for nice weekend give pleasure to you. Bye!!

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름].  I always look forward to have class with you  that뭩 why I feel quite sad because I won뭪 have class with you today. But it뭩 good that you went out with your friends tonight after a long day at work. It is one way to release your weekly stress. Enjoy the rest of the days, [이름].I뭠l see you on Monday!

 

Hello, Jesica~~ How are you doing?

>>>Hello, Jessica!How are you doing?
Of cource, I'm fine. And I guess you too~ Right?

>>>correct sentence
Today I pressed a button delaying our today class.

>>>I cancelled our class today.

Cause my friends contacted me in the morning and they wanted to meet me after work.

>>>Because my friends contacted me this morning and they asked me to meet them after work.
So, I'm so sorry about this.

>>>correct sentence
I'm always waiting to our class sincery.

>>>I

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