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Hi [이름]l!
Good evening! I hope you are doing great tonight! Here is now my correction on the sentences that you wrote:
I live in a villa building near Sansudong with a mom.
>> I live in a villa building near Sansudong with my mom.
My father and sister lives other places for their business.
>> My father and sister live in other places for their businesses.
My house has two rooms. One is my room, another is mom's room.
>> My house has two rooms. One is my room and the other one is my mother's.
And my house has a bathroom and a kitchen and a living room.
>>Correct
>>OR It also has a bathroom, a kitchen and a living room.
That house admit little light, as there are a lot of buildings.
>> My house admits little light as there are a lot of buildings surrounding it.
My house is just right for two people.
>>Correct
I have a bed, desk, chair, computer in my room.
>>I have a bed, a desk, a chair and a computer in my room.
Back to my bed, I have a closet. Next to my closet, I have a dressing table and next to my desk, I have a hanger.
>> I have closet near my bed and next to it is my dressing table. Beside my desk is a rack. (Hanger is the one that you use to hang garments.)
I have a lot of clothes so, I have a lot of wardrobe in my room.
>> I have many clothes so I have a lot of wardrobe in my room.
-Teacher Venus
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