hi >.<
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강사 첨삭
Dear [이름],
Your story was really scary. That's why you should always be careful when you are using networking sites. You should watch out for the information that you put there. Personal/specific data about you should not be put there. There are hackers out there. And also, be careful of the pictures that you put in your homepages. These hackers can get them and use your face in some bad advertisements like porn sites or something. Filter your online friends. Only add those whom you really know. And edit your privacy setting so strangers cannot view your profile.
Take care always.
MY CORRECTIONS^^:
i'm facebook user.
>>I뭢 a facebook user.
one day, i recieved a application from one man who live in jeju.
>>One day, I received a friend request from a man who lives in Jeju.
and he sent a message " oh i saw your photo, i like you."
>>CORRECT J
i really hate this type of man.
>>CORRECT J
and i excepted him from my on'line friends.
>>And I blocked/ignored him to be my online friend.
then , few days ago , i got a call from someone.
>>CORRECTJ
>>Then, a few days ago, I got a call from someone. -- BETTER
he was a facebook man.
>>He was a man from facebook.
he found my homepage on cyworld.
>>CORRECT J
and he found my phone number.
>>CORRECT J
he is calling me and sending message for me everyday.
>>He was calling me and sending me messages everyday.
i really scared. :(
>>I was really scared.
i established my phone to reject his call and message.
>>I programmed my phone to reject his calls and messages.
but he sent a message " next week i will go to your school to meet you. i really want to meet you."
>>But he sent a message saying, 밡ext week, I will go to your school to meet you. I really want to meet you
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