hi!!

2011-03-25 · 첨삭 강사 Joanna

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good morning:) every bad things get solved yesterday. first i fixed up my phone completely. and the other is about stalker. my male friend who is J called stalker yesterday morning. J said " i don't like way you do. i really hate you. and she too. when i say like this, stop to call her. and he said " okay" hang up the call, J got a call from him he said " i really like her. i can't concentrate on my job. and i can't sleep at night because of her. i wrote letters to send her. i only want to send letters to her." J said "you can leave your letter security office of her university. then i will send to her letters. after that call, i haven't recieved a phone call and sms :)

강사 첨삭

Hello, beautiful! Let your positive outlook dominate your recent situation. I believe you can. Weigh things a hundred times before doing any actions. Take care always! It’s me, T. Joanna   good morning:) >>Good morning! every bad things get solved yesterday. >>Every bad thing that I considered went right yesterday. first i fixed up my phone completely. >>First, my phone was completely fixed. and the other is about stalker. >>And about the stalker, my male friend who is J called stalker yesterday morning. >>well, a male friend of mine named “J” called “him” yesterday morning. J said " i don't like way you do. i really hate you. and she too. >>J said, “I don’t like what you’re doing. We hate you for doing such acts.” when i say like this, stop to call her. and he said " okay" >>J told him to stop calling me and the stalker said, okay. hang up the call, J got a call from him he said " i really like her. i can't concentrate on my job. and i can't sleep at night because of her. >J got a call from the stalker saying, “I couldn’t take focus on my job and I couldn’t sleep well at night thinking about her.” i wrote letters to send her. i only want to send letters to her." >>”I just want to send letters to her,” he added. J said "you can leave your letter security office of her university. then i will send to her letters. >>J said, “You can leave your letter to the security office of her university then I will be the one to send her those.” after that call, i haven't recieved a phone call and sms :) >>After that call, I haven’t received any phone calls or sms anymore.  

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