hi!!
학생이 쓴 원문
good morning:)
every bad things get solved yesterday.
first i fixed up my phone completely.
and the other is about stalker.
my male friend who is J called stalker yesterday morning.
J said " i don't like way you do. i really hate you. and she too.
when i say like this, stop to call her.
and he said " okay"
hang up the call, J got a call from him
he said " i really like her. i can't concentrate on my job. and i can't sleep at night because of her. i wrote letters to send her. i only want to send letters to her."
J said "you can leave your letter security office of her university. then i will send to her letters.
after that call, i haven't recieved a phone call and sms :)
강사 첨삭
Hello, beautiful!
Let your positive outlook dominate your recent situation.
I believe you can. Weigh things a hundred times before doing any actions.
Take care always!
It’s me,
T. Joanna
good morning:)
>>Good morning!
every bad things get solved yesterday.
>>Every bad thing that I considered went right yesterday.
first i fixed up my phone completely.
>>First, my phone was completely fixed.
and the other is about stalker.
>>And about the stalker,
my male friend who is J called stalker yesterday morning.
>>well, a male friend of mine named “J” called “him” yesterday morning.
J said " i don't like way you do. i really hate you. and she too.
>>J said, “I don’t like what you’re doing. We hate you for doing such acts.”
when i say like this, stop to call her. and he said " okay"
>>J told him to stop calling me and the stalker said, okay.
hang up the call, J got a call from him
he said " i really like her. i can't concentrate on my job. and i can't sleep at night because of her.
>J got a call from the stalker saying, “I couldn’t take focus on my job and I couldn’t sleep well at night thinking about her.”
i wrote letters to send her. i only want to send letters to her."
>>”I just want to send letters to her,” he added.
J said "you can leave your letter security office of her university. then i will send to her letters.
>>J said, “You can leave your letter to the security office of her university then I will be the one to send her those.”
after that call, i haven't recieved a phone call and sms :)
>>After that call, I haven’t received any phone calls or sms anymore.
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