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2015-02-26 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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Should teachers have to wear uniforms or have a dress code? In my opinion, teachers have to have a dress code. Of course, students have to wear their uniforms. If they don't have a dress code or wear their uniforms, they couldn't focus their job. Also, I think that when they wear their uniforms, their appearance seems a good.

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Hi [이름]! ^^ Thank you for answering your homework and for sharing your opinion about the topic given. I also agree that teachers should wear their uniforms to identify where they are teaching and to recognize them that they are teachers. In fact, it is stated in the law that all teachers must have a dress code. :) By the way, please study your correcions below, okay. :) Have a great day ahead! ^^   ~~Teacher Kris     In my opinion, teachers have to have a dress code. >> CorrectOf course, students have to wear their uniforms. >> CorrectIf they don\'t have a dress code or wear their uniforms, they couldn\'t focus their job. >> If they don\'t have a dress code or wear their uniforms, they couldn\'t focus on their job.lso, I think that when they wear their uniforms, their appearance seems a good. >> So, I think that when they wear their uniforms, their appearance look good.

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