Hi~
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Dear [이름],
Good evening! ^.^
Happy Tuesday! ^^
Very good! ^^,
You made a good composition.
However, you still need to observe your grammar.
Anyway, thanks for your sharing about your day! ^^
See you in class! ^^,
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
Yes, the water pollution is a very serious problem in Korea.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: Yes, the water pollution is a very serious problem in our nation.
But, many people ignore that problem.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: However, many people ignore it.
It\'s imptotant to save water, obviously.
>> It\'s important to save water, obviously.
I know that I have to save water, and use as less as possible.
>> I know that I have to save water and use as less as possible.
>> OR: I know that I have to save water and use it wisely.
That\'s not that easy to have limit on using water.
>> CORRECT!
I think it\'s because water is very familiar to us, so many people think that using water is not that big deal.
>> CORRECT!
I do even act like that.
>> CORRECT!
We need to be aware of problems that come from overusing, not saving water.
>> CORRECT!
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