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2010-03-02 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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hi abby~ your happy to weenkend now. umm. i took toeic test today. i was tension cuz first test. ummm time was so fast. when i was listening that speaker was so fast. anyway good Experience. unmm... day after tomorrow is university start date. i am very depresse.. anyway see you tuesday. bye bye

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Hi [이름] here are your corrections:   hi abby~ >>>Hi Abby! your happy to weenkend now. >>> You're happy because it's weekend now.umm. i took toeic test today.>>> Ummm. I took the TOEIC test today. i was tension cuz first test. >>>I was tensed because it was my first time.ummm time was so fast. when i was listening that speaker was so fast. >>> Ummm time was so fast when I was listening to the speaker.anyway good Experience. >>> anyway it was a good experienceumm... day after tomorrow is university start date. >>> ummm... the day after tomorrow is the first day of school in the university.i am very depresse.. >>> I am very depressed.anyway see you tuesday. bye bye >>> Anyway see you Tuesday. Bye bye!

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