hi
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hi abby~
your happy to weenkend now.
umm. i took toeic test today.
i was tension cuz first test.
ummm time was so fast. when i was listening that speaker was so fast.
anyway good Experience.
unmm... day after tomorrow is university start date.
i am very depresse..
anyway see you tuesday. bye bye
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Hi [이름] here are your corrections:
hi abby~
>>>Hi Abby!
your happy to weenkend now.
>>> You're happy because it's weekend now.umm. i took toeic test today.>>> Ummm. I took the TOEIC test today.
i was tension cuz first test.
>>>I was tensed because it was my first time.ummm time was so fast. when i was listening that speaker was so fast.
>>> Ummm time was so fast when I was listening to the speaker.anyway good Experience.
>>> anyway it was a good experienceumm... day after tomorrow is university start date.
>>> ummm... the day after tomorrow is the first day of school in the university.i am very depresse..
>>> I am very depressed.anyway see you tuesday. bye bye
>>> Anyway see you Tuesday. Bye bye!
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