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it is my OPIC writing when u traveled in ur childhood ? i went to Busan with my family , about 15 years ago when i was cute girl. i really liked to swim in shallow water when we visited the beach in Busan. after wearing one piece swimsuit that i cherished , i enjoied to swim with my younger brother and in my memorry besides swimming i did eat all kind of local food that was tasty

Hi [이름]! Thank you for sharing this story. I’m sure this made you smile because you looked back at what you did when you were young. Have a great night! -       Teacher Kristel-   it is my OPIC writing >> This is my OPIC writing.when u traveled in ur childhood ?>> Where did you travel when you were a child?i went to Busan with my family , about 15 years ago when i was cute girl. >> I went to Busan with my family about 15 years ago. I was a cute girl by then.i really liked to swim in shallow water when we visited the beach in Busan. >> I really liked to swim in shallow water when we were at the beach in Busan.after wearing one piece swimsuit that i cherished , i enjoied to swim with my younger brother and in my memorry besides swimming i did eat all kind of local food that was tasty >> After wearing my one piece swimsuit, which I cherished, I enjoyed swimming with my younger brother. I also remember eating all kinds of local food which were very tasty aside from swimming.