Hi~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good evening Jane ^.^
Happy Monday again,
Thank you so much for your time.
I appreciate that you ask questions.
I hope that you will have a good week ahead of you.
Teacher Nina
Hi~~~~~~~
>> correct
2. Because of the need for the language suitable for the people.
>> It was created because of the need for language that will be suitable for the people
for language / for a language / for the language what is the right expression?
>> Which one is the right term to use: for language, for a language, for the language.
( It should be with the article \"a\" because it is still a need until now. ^.^ )
5. King Sejong invented Hangul in 1446.
>> King Sejong created Hangul in 1446
I know it\'s a complete sentence.
(Yes, you are right. But the better term to use is created. ^^)
My sentence is below.
chinese characters were difficult for the commom person to understand.
>> Chinese characters were difficult for the common people to understand.
>> OR: Chinese characters were difficult for people to understand.
It was created because of the need for language that will be suitable for the people.
>> correct
>> Better: It was created because of the need for a language that will be suitable for the people.
King Sejong created Hangeul in 1446 and published a book titled \"HUN-MIN-JEONG-EUM\".
>> correct
The title means \" The right sound to teach people\"
>> correct
I think it\'s a problem with frequent use \"created\"
>> I think it is a problem when we use the term \"created\" frequently.
(Synonym of created: construct, make, form, build and so on. But of course, you have to be careful when you are going to use it in a sentence. )
6. You can see Hangul was survive.
>> You can see Hangul survived.
>> OR: As you can see Hangul survived.
I said that \" So you can see Hangeul was survived eliminative attacks from many angles.
>> I said, \" So you can see Hangeul survived the eliminative attacks from many angles.
(I\'m sorry, I just wrote the part that was incorrect. I will write the whole sentence next time. ^^)
11. He defended against the Northerners and build the 6 camps toward the enemy.
>> He defended against the Northerners and built the 6 camps toward the enemy
I said that \"He defended against the northerners and built the camps to ward off the enemy.
(I\'m sorry, but I heard it \"build\". I listened to the recording again. ^^)
And next time, I want to talk about our important day!!
>> correct
buy buy ~~~~~~
>> Did you mean: Bye bye!
>> OR: Goodbye.
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