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2015-07-06 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Hi~~~~~~~ 2. Because of the need for the language suitable for the people. >> It was created because of the need for language that will be suitable for the people for language / for a language / for the language what is the right expression? 5. King Sejong invented Hangul in 1446. >> King Sejong created Hangul in 1446 I know it's a complete sentence. My sentence is below. chinese characters were difficult for the commom person to understand. It was created because of the need for language that will be suitable for the people. King Sejong created Hangeul in 1446 and published a book titled "HUN-MIN-JEONG-EUM". The title means " The right sound to teach people" I think it's a problem with frequent use "created" 6. You can see Hangul was survive. >> You can see Hangul survived. >> OR: As you can see Hangul survived. I said that " So you can see Hangeul was survived eliminative attacks from many angles. 11. He defended against the Northerners and build the 6 camps toward the enemy. >> He defended against the Northerners and built the 6 camps toward the enemy I said that "He defended against the northerners and built the camps to ward off the enemy. And next time, I want to talk about our important day!! buy buy ~~~~~~

강사 첨삭

Good evening Jane ^.^

Happy Monday again,

Thank you so much for your time.

I appreciate that you ask questions.

I hope that you will have a good week ahead of you.

Teacher Nina


Hi~~~~~~~
>> correct
2. Because of the need for the language suitable for the people.
>> It was created because of the need for language that will be suitable for the people
for language / for a language / for the language what is the right expression?

>> Which one is the right term to use: for language, for a language, for the language.

( It should be with the article \"a\" because it is still a need until now. ^.^ )


 5. King Sejong invented Hangul in 1446.
>> King Sejong created Hangul in 1446
I know it\'s a complete sentence.

(Yes, you are right. But the better term to use is created. ^^)

My sentence is below.
chinese characters were difficult for the commom person to understand.

>> Chinese characters were difficult for the common people to understand.

>> OR: Chinese characters were difficult for people to understand.
It was created because of the need for language that will be suitable for the people. 

>> correct

>> Better: It was created because of the need for a language that will be suitable for the people. 

King Sejong created Hangeul in 1446 and published a book titled \"HUN-MIN-JEONG-EUM\".

>> correct

The title means \" The right sound to teach people\"

>> correct 

I think it\'s a problem with frequent use \"created\" 

>> I think it is a problem when we use the term \"created\" frequently. 

(Synonym of created: construct, make, form, build and so on. But of course, you have to be careful when you are going to use it in a sentence. )

6. You can see Hangul was survive.
>> You can see Hangul survived.
>> OR: As you can see Hangul survived.

I said that \" So you can see Hangeul was survived eliminative attacks from many angles.
>> I said, \" So you can see Hangeul survived the eliminative attacks from many angles.

(I\'m sorry, I just wrote the part that was incorrect. I will write the whole sentence next time. ^^)

11. He defended against the Northerners and build the 6 camps toward the enemy.
>> He defended against the Northerners and built the 6 camps toward the enemy

I said that \"He defended against the northerners and built the camps to ward off the enemy.

(I\'m sorry, but I heard it \"build\". I listened to the recording again. ^^)

And next time, I want to talk about our important day!!

>> correct

buy buy ~~~~~~

>> Did you mean: Bye bye!

>> OR: Goodbye.

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