Hi~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Jane ^.^
Thank you for sending in your feedback.
I appreciate that you are keen in terms of grammar. ^.^
However, there are English rules that you need to follow.
I\'m sorry if I misheard the words and sentences that you said during the class.
But I think you should also listen to the class recording.
In order for you to know how well you are improving. ^^
Teacher Nina
6. Can you advice sentence structure?
>> Can you give me a piece of advice about the sentence sentence?
sentence structure?
>> Can you give me a piece of advice about the sentence structure?
(Yes, you are right, (I\'m sorry for the typo,^^ )
8. There are two hundred types Kimchi Korea.
>> There are two hundred types of Kimchi in Korea
There are about two hundred typies of kimchi in korea
( There is no word such as \"typies\" and Korea should be written in capital letters. ^^)
9. Chinese cabbages that we were used for making Kimchi.
>> Chinese cabbages were used in making Kimch
At that time, agriculture was the main industry in korea. Chinese cabbages that were used for making Kimchi were widely grown.
(This is a correct sentence. ^^)
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