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2015-07-10 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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6. Can you advice sentence structure? >> Can you give me a piece of advice about the sentence sentence? sentence structure? 8. There are two hundred types Kimchi Korea. >> There are two hundred types of Kimchi in Korea There are about two hundred typies of kimchi in korea 9. Chinese cabbages that we were used for making Kimchi. >> Chinese cabbages were used in making Kimch At that time, agriculture was the main industry in korea. Chinese cabbages that were used for making Kimchi were widely grown.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jane ^.^

Thank you for sending in your feedback.

I appreciate that you are keen in terms of grammar. ^.^

However, there are English rules that you need to follow.

I\'m sorry if I misheard the words and sentences that you said during the class.

But I think you should also listen to the class recording.

In order for you to know how well you are improving. ^^

Teacher Nina


6. Can you advice sentence structure?
>> Can you give me a piece of advice about the sentence sentence?

sentence structure?

>> Can you give me a piece of advice about the sentence structure?

(Yes, you are right, (I\'m sorry for the typo,^^ )

8. There are two hundred types Kimchi Korea.
>> There are two hundred types of Kimchi in Korea

There are about two hundred typies of kimchi in korea

( There is no word such as \"typies\" and Korea should be written in capital letters. ^^)

9. Chinese cabbages that we were used for making Kimchi.
>> Chinese cabbages were used in making Kimch

At that time, agriculture was the main industry in korea. Chinese cabbages that were used for making Kimchi were widely grown.

(This is a correct sentence. ^^)

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