hi~~
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강사 첨삭
Hello Jane ^^
Good evening.
I appreciate that you send your feedback immediately.
However, I encourage you to check your page at least after thirty minutes of our class.
I usually polish everything on your page after our class.
And I listen to the recording too, in order to check if I noted your sentences correctly.
Have a good day.
Teacher Nina
4. We go there to take a walk along the side of Han River to cooled up from heat.
>> We go there to take a walk along Han River to get rid of heat.
>> OR: We go there to talk near the Han River to get rid of heat.
( I checked your page and my corrections were fixed. I think the time you got this sentence from your evaluation page, I was still modifying it. ^^)
In the hot summer night of every year, we go there to take a walk along the side of Han river while cooling off from heat
>> In the hot summer night of every year, we go there to take a walk along the Han River to feel cool.
>> OR: In the hot summer night of every year, we go there to take a walk along the Han River to get rid of the heat.
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