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Today, I want to tell about flower festival in Korea.
Usually, in begin of the spring, we open flower festival.
Main flower is cherry blossom.
All most cities where are in Korea open the flower festival, but the start day is diffrent.
It open from southern to northern.
Korean people think that starting flower festival means start to spring. So, Korean people like the flower festival.
Actually, I never been the flower festival. Nowadays, the flower festival almost finish.
Next year, I will go to flower festival.
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Hi there my dear [이름], it was so nice to know and be familiar with one of the holidays that you celebrate in your country..:)
I also want to attend such festivals if Ill be given the chance..^^
Anyway, you could express your ideas well. But here are some of the corrections, I hope they are of big help to you...
Talk to you again my dear.
T.Cam
Today, I want to tell about flower festival in Korea.>>correct!
Usually, in begin of the spring, we open flower festival.
Usually, in begin of the spring, we open flower festival.
>>Usually, in the beginning of Spring, we open this so called Flower Festival.
Main flower is cherry blossom.
Main flower is cherry blossom.
>>The main flower in this festival is the Cherry Blossoms.
All most cities where are in Korea open the flower festival, but the start day is diffrent.
All most cities where are in Korea open the flower festival, but the start day is diffrent.
>>Almost all cities in Korea celebrate Flower Festival but not in the same date.
It open from southern to northern.
>>It opens from the southern part to the northern part of our country.
Korean people think that starting flower festival means start to spring.
Korean people think that starting flower festival means start to spring.
>>Korean people think that Spring is the start of Flower Festival.
So, Korean people like the flower festival.
>>So Korean people like Flower Festival.
Actually, I never been the flower festival. Nowadays, the flower festival almost finish.
Actually, I never been the flower festival. Nowadays, the flower festival almost finish.
>>Actually, I havent been to a Flower Festival and this festival is about to end this month.
Next year, I will go to flower festival.
Next year, I will go to flower festival.
>>Next year, Ill try my best to attend this festival.
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