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I would like to write a letter rather than a composition. Correct me, if I have wrong sentences. Hi! Paula. What happened to you yesterday?. You missed yesterday our class and I heard that you were sick. I seriously worried about you. My new teacher, Angelica, called me yesterday and we had a free talking class without text. The teacher was calm and had a small voice, and correct my wrong grammer and pronounciation directly as soon as I finished speaking. When I compared to you, it is more helpful to me. But I like you better. You said always in a clear and energetic voice and I miss your energetic speaking and laugh. I can guess that you are a cheerful woman by your voice. Am I right? Anyway I hope we can meet today again through the phone. Have a nice evening and coming holiday. Be happy and stay healthy!!

Dear [Name]. [이름], An energetic and a healthy Monday again! ^.^ Good day! ^,^ I appreciate your effort to write a letter for me. Thank you for asking about my condition! ^^ It\'s a great feeling that I know your mind. By the way, I am so glad that you enjoyed your class with Teacher Angelica. Since you like her teaching style, I will do my best to teach like her. I like what you wrote on your letter. I am learning. Thank you very much! ^^, Thank you also for appreciating my voice! ^^. Anyway, don\'t forget the corrections and suggestions below. That\'s all for now! ^^ Happy reading! ^^, See you later! ^^. ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~ I would like to write a letter rather than a composition.  >> CORRECT! Correct me, if I have wrong sentences. >> Correct me if I have wrong sentences. (Don\'t put a COMMA before an IF-STATEMENT, if it is placed at the last part of a sentence.) >> OR: If I have wrong sentences, correct me. Hi! Paula.  >> Hi, Paula! (PUNCTUATION) What happened to you yesterday?.  >> What happened to you yesterday? (PUNCTUATION) You missed yesterday our class and I heard that you were sick.  >> You missed yesterday our class, and I heard that you were sick. (PUNCTUATION) >> OR: You missed our class yesterday, and I heard that you were sick. I seriously worried about you.  >> CORRECT! My new teacher, Angelica, called me yesterday and we had a free talking class without text.  >> My new teacher, Angelica, called me yesterday, and we had a free talking class without our textbook. (PUNCTUATION) >> BETTER: My sub-teacher, Angelica, called me yesterday, and we had a free talking class without our textbook. The teacher was calm and had a small voice, and correct my wrong grammer and pronounciation directly as soon as I finished speaking.  >> The teacher was calm, had a small voice and corrected my wrong grammar and pronunciation directly as soon as I finished speaking. (GRAMMAR and SPELLING)  When I compared to you, it is more helpful to me.  >> I THINK WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY IS: When I compared her to you, her teaching strategy is more helpful to me. But I like you better.  >> But, I like you better. (PUNCTUATION) >> OR: However, I like you better. You said always in a clear and energetic voice and I miss your energetic speaking and laugh.  >> IT IS BETTER TO SAY: You always talk to me in a clear and energetic voice, and I miss your energetic speaking and laugh. I can guess that you are a cheerful woman by your voice.  >> CORRECT! Am I right?  >> CORRECT! Anyway I hope we can meet today again through the phone.  >> Anyway, I hope we can meet today again through the phone. (PUNCTUATION) Have a nice evening and coming holiday.  >> CORRECT! >> BETTER: Have a nice evening and  coming holiday! Be happy and stay healthy!! >> CORRECT! >> OR: Be happy and stay healthy!