Hi^^

2011-04-25 · 첨삭 강사 camille

학생이 쓴 원문

Today, i'm telling about a scandal. The scandal is very big and huge in Korea. Last thursday happened that one of actress and singer, who are very famous in Korea, have married. However, all Korean people didn't know, even their best friedns. They hide that during 13 years. All Korean people were surprised when they heard that. nowadays, the scandal is a big gossip. People knew situation that they have married, because the actress is at law about an estate and divorce. After show this scandal it has a lot of rumor. Nobody knows which one is true. I really want to know the true.

강사 첨삭

Hello there my dear [이름]!^^

Rumors are really interesting for some people. It is but normal to hear different issues about people especially popular people. However,it is a good thing that you are still interested to know the truth. Probably you'll know soon. Have a good day!

-T.Camille-

Today, i'm telling about a scandal.

>>Today, I will tell about a scandal.

>>Today Im gonna tell you about a scandal.

The scandal is very big and huge in Korea.

>>The scandal is a very big issue in Korea.

Last thursday happened that one of actress and singer, who are very famous in Korea, have married. 

>>A famous actress and singer in Korea got married last Thursday.

However, all Korean people didn't know, even their best friedns.

>>However,all Korean people didnt know about their relationship, even their best friends.
They hide that during 13 years.

>>They hid that for 13 years.
All Korean people were surprised when they heard that.

>>Correct
nowadays, the scandal is a big gossip.

>>Nowadays, the scandal is a big gossip.
People knew situation that they have married, because the actress is at law about an estate and divorce.

>>People knew that they decided to get married because the actress is in an issue about estate and divorce.

After show this scandal it has a lot of rumor.

>>After this scandal, it caused a lot of rumor.
Nobody knows which one is true.

>>Correct
I really want to know the true.

>>I really want to know the truth.

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