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Hello there my dear [이름]!^^
Rumors are really interesting for some people. It is but normal to hear different issues about people especially popular people. However,it is a good thing that you are still interested to know the truth. Probably you'll know soon. Have a good day!
-T.Camille-
Today, i'm telling about a scandal.
>>Today, I will tell about a scandal.
>>Today Im gonna tell you about a scandal.
The scandal is very big and huge in Korea.>>The scandal is a very big issue in Korea.
Last thursday happened that one of actress and singer, who are very famous in Korea, have married.>>A famous actress and singer in Korea got married last Thursday.
However, all Korean people didn't know, even their best friedns.
>>However,all Korean people didnt know about their relationship, even their best friends.
They hide that during 13 years.
>>They hid that for 13 years.
All Korean people were surprised when they heard that.
>>Correct
nowadays, the scandal is a big gossip.
>>Nowadays, the scandal is a big gossip.
People knew situation that they have married, because the actress is at law about an estate and divorce.
>>People knew that they decided to get married because the actress is in an issue about estate and divorce.
After show this scandal it has a lot of rumor.
>>After this scandal, it caused a lot of rumor.
Nobody knows which one is true.
>>Correct
I really want to know the true.
>>I really want to know the truth.
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