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2011-04-27 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Yesterday, I saw my ideal type. I and my friend wanted to see a trial. We went to law court which is on fourth floor, and we just entered one of court. That time I saw one man who is my ideal type. I was so happy. He was wearing a suit, the suit fits nicely to him. I couldn't focus on trial. Today, I saw him by chance. My friend said, you should say something, like hello. Maybe I won't. I'm very shy. I need courage.

강사 첨삭

Hello there my dear [이름]..:)

You know what my dear,it makes me smile whenever I remember your story about this guy..(your ideal guy), kkkk...

I guess this is the time weve been waiting for, your future boyfriend!kk^^

Anyway, just be brave enough to make friends, we might not know, he also wants to make friends with you..

Anyway, talk to you again tomorrow my dear..Good night..

T.Cam

Yesterday, I saw my ideal type.

>>correct!

>>Yesterday I saw my ideal guy.:)
I and my friend wanted to see a trial.

>>correct!
We went to law court which is on fourth floor, and we just entered one of courts.

>>We went to a court which is on the fourth floor, and we just entered one of the courts.
That time I saw one man who is my ideal type.

>>That time, I saw the guy who is my ideal type.
I was so happy.

>>correct!
He was wearing a suit, the suit fits nicely to him.

>>He was wearing a suit, the suit fits him nicely.

I couldn't focus on trial.

>>I couldnt focus on the trial.
Today, I saw him by chance.

>>correct!
My friend said, you should say something, like hello.

>>correct!
Maybe I won't. I'm very shy.

>>correct!
I need courage.

>>correct!

>>I need to be brave.

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