hi
학생이 쓴 원문
hi abby~
nice meet you agian.
i was not Familiar to call in morning. i had wanted to tell you i happy to meet you agin. i didn't told you.i was put the feel.
i feel more comfortable you than new teacher.
so i need you. anyway nice meet you agin.
see ya~
강사 첨삭
Hello Sara!
I’m very glad that you found time to write a composition. I’m very much fluttered of your comments [이름]. I hope to share my knowledge to you and hoping that you will keep interested in learning as what you are now. I know that you can be very successful in life. Just have more patience and enjoy learning. I’m very much impressed that you like me as your teacher. Don’t worry, I’ll do everything to help you in mastering your skill. Anyhow, I want you to study more vocabulary words which could help you further. Do well on practicing and I believe that you could improve more. Have a great day and take care! See you tomorrow! ^_^
T. Abby “_)
Here are my corrections for you:
hi abby~
>> Hi Abby!nice meet you agian.
>> It was nice meeting you again.i was not Familiar to call in morning.
>> I’m not used being called early in the morning.
i had wanted to tell you i happy to meet you agin.
>> I wanted to tell you that I was so happy having class with you again.
i didn't told you.
>> I wasn’t able to tell you.
>> I was so shy to tell you.
>> I didn’t tell you.
>> I didn’t have the chance to tell you
i was put the feel.
>> But I just felt it.
i feel more comfortable you than new teacher.
>> I feel more comfortable having you as my teacher than the new one.so i need you.
>> So I need you to teach me.
anyway nice meet you agin.
>> Anyway, nice meeting you again.see ya~
>> See ya!
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