HI-
학생이 쓴 원문
Hell-
lie- i little worried about you ㅠ
you seemed to sick today-
are you okay?
i hope you will get soon ready-
i heard that philiephins hot summer nation. so i don't have to worried abot cold or cool. is't it?
i will go to the cebu to study english -
can i meet you at the philiephins? i hope that-ㅋㅋ
i want make a friends with native.ㅋㅋ
anyway- do you listen to my sing~? :)
i will sing it for you- but even i don't know when it is.- ㅋㅋ
i think i should so many preactice
do you have a e-mail adress? i can send you my UCC(user creative contents) i am makeing it with my feirnds. i'll song in the UCC
if you let me know your adress, l can send it when have made it -
take care - lei
take cold madicine when you go to the bad ;)
강사 첨삭
Hi Kim!!
Thank you for being so concerned about me. Don't worry, it's just a simple runny nose and headache. Maybe I just needed to have some rest and take medicine. Apparently Kim, I can't give out my email address, it's against company policy. I would like to meet you if you will come here in the Philippines. I hope I will have a free time. :-)
Lei :-)
Hell->>Hellolie- i little worried about you ㅠ>>lei, I뭢 a little worried about youyou seemed to sick today->>You seem to be sick today.are you okay?>>corecti hope you will get soon ready->>I hope for you to get well soon.i heard that philiephins hot summer nation.
>>I heard that Philippines
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