hi!

2011-05-17 · 첨삭 강사 Joanna

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yesterday, i went to outback stake house for my report. actually, i wanted to know about management strategy of outback. so i sent a e-mail to branch manager. and she told me that she want to meet me in outback. she was so kind person. and she explained what i want to know in detail. when i got a report's theme, i wondered that how the report developing me. but during the inteview, i was impressed of her effort. and i thought that there is no person who try to do something for future. i thank you for your help for my future:)

강사 첨삭

I'm so glad to hear that positive inspiration in you, [이름]. Keep moving forward. I'll help you while I still can. Good luck in your everyday undertakings! It's me, T. Joanna   yesterday, i went to outback stake house for my report. >>Yesterday, I went to Outback Steakhouse for my report.actually, i wanted to know about management strategy of outback. >>Actually, I wanted to know about the management strategy of Outback Steakhouse.so i sent a e-mail to branch manager. >>So, I sent an e-mail to the branch manager.and she told me that she want to meet me in outback. >>And to my surprise, she responded saying she wants to meet in the Steakhouse.she was so kind person. >>She is a kind peron.and she explained what i want to know in detail. >>In details, she explained what I wanted to know.when i got a report's theme, i wondered that how the report developing me.>>When I got the report's theme, I wondered how it is developing me.but during the inteview, i was impressed of her effort. >>But during the interview, I was impressed of her effort. (Check capitalization, punctuation and spelling)and i thought that there is no person who try to do something for future.>>And I thought that there is no one who would dare try to do something for the future.i thank you for your help for my future:) >>I thank you for helping me reach my bright future.

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