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2010-03-09 · 첨삭 강사 abby

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hi abby i was bed condition on today class. i get fuzzy i listen to Recording File my voice is very small voice. it look like murmur kkk anyway meet the good voice to tomorrow

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Hello [이름]!   Yeah, you’re right because you really did not have the concentration on our class yesterday. You were fuzzy that time but I guess that was because you had no enough sleep and my call even woke you up. So that’s understandable anyway. Don’t worry about it. Nevertheless, I just want you to be speak more. Nowadays, I noticed that you don’t speak a lot anymore. Just be patient in studying new vocabularies which could be helpful in polishing your communication skills. Do well on practicing and I believe that you could improve more. Have a great day and take care! See you tomorrow! ^_^   T. Abby “_)   Here are my corrections for you: hi abby >> Hi Abby!i was bed condition on today class. >> I was in a bad mood when we had our class this morning. >> I was not in a good condition when we were having our class this morning. >> I was in a bad condition having class with you this morning. i get fuzzy >> I was fuzzy in our class i listen to Recording File my voice is very small voice. >> I listened to our recording and my voice was so soft it look like murmur kkk >> It seems like I was just murmuringanyway meet the good voice to tomorrow >> Anyway, I’ll just meet you again tomorrow and pretty sure I’ll have a better voice.

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