hi :)
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that this composition is examined by faye:)
Nice to meet you!!
This morning, as soon as i got your call, i was very surprised.
and i'm pleased that you are so bright.
anyway, i have to study english for my toeic and other report.
i had to do that when i hang up the call.
but i was so sleepy:(
and i went to bed...........
today will be more hard for me.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Nice to meet you too. Thank you for the comment. I really appreciate it. It's okay that you slept again because I know that you are a very busy person and is tired. I hope that you would study for your TOEIC even for just a while it will really help. Please be careful in the little details you need for completing sentences always remember to put a period (.) at the end of your sentence and always start with a capital letter. Take care always!
T.Faye
Here are some of your corrections:
I think that this composition is examined by faye:)
>>Correct!Nice to meet you!!
>>Correct!This morning, as soon as i got your call, i was very surprised.
>>Correct!
>>Capital letter :I
and i'm pleased that you are so bright.
>>And I'm pleased because you are so bright.anyway, i have to study english for my toeic and other report.
>>Correct!
>>Capital letter: Anywayi had to do that when i hang up the call.>>Correct!
>>Capital letter: I
but i was so sleepy:( and i went to bed...........>>But I was so sleepy so I went back to bed?
today will be more hard for me.
>>It's a start of another hard day.
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