hi :)

2011-05-19 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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I think that this composition is examined by faye:) Nice to meet you!! This morning, as soon as i got your call, i was very surprised. and i'm pleased that you are so bright. anyway, i have to study english for my toeic and other report. i had to do that when i hang up the call. but i was so sleepy:( and i went to bed........... today will be more hard for me.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Nice to meet you too. Thank you for the comment. I really appreciate it. It's okay that you slept again because I know that you are a very busy person and is tired. I hope that you would study for your TOEIC even for just a while it will really help. Please be careful in the little details you need for completing sentences always remember to put a period (.) at the end of your sentence and always start with a capital letter. Take care always! T.Faye   Here are some of your corrections: I think that this composition is examined by faye:) >>Correct!Nice to meet you!! >>Correct!This morning, as soon as i got your call, i was very surprised. >>Correct! >>Capital letter :I and i'm pleased that you are so bright. >>And I'm pleased because you are so bright.anyway, i have to study english for my toeic and other report. >>Correct! >>Capital letter: Anywayi had to do that when i hang up the call.>>Correct! >>Capital letter: I but i was so sleepy:( and i went to bed...........>>But I was so sleepy so I went back to bed? today will be more hard for me. >>It's a start of another hard day.

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