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2016-02-22 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Hi teacher~ I was very nervous on my first class^^. I am very happy to see you. Thanks. 1. My sister works out every day, so she's in very good shape. 2. He's not fat, but he has a bit of a fat. 3. He's six feet tall. 4. He walks with a limp. 5. My grandfather has trouble walking fast. (= he can't walk fast easily)

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]! Thanks for your composition today! I noticed that you were very nervous. I hope you will feel more comfortable with me as days pass by. Let\'s work hard together for your improvement. Feel free to ask me questions about our lesson. I will be glad to help you in any way that I can.^^ T. JanE ^^ Hi teacher~>> Correct I was very nervous on my first class^^.>> Correct I am very happy to see you. Thanks. >> Correct 1. My sister works out every day, so she\'s in very good shape.>> Correct 2. He\'s not fat, but he has a bit of a fat.>> He\'s not fat, but he has a bit of a (belly). 3. He\'s six feet tall.>> Correct 4. He walks with a limp.>> Correct 5. My grandfather has trouble walking fast. (= he can\'t walk fast easily) >> Correct  

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